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someday this pen
would stop writing further
day would come
when these eyes would see
no lightening no thunder
when there would be no
further promises of dawn.
everything would come to a halt
no aspirations , no fears , no remorse..
no one to bewilder
an eternal slumber serene
no push no gravity
vastness of sky would be fathomable
depths of ocean no longer unplumbed
no further cages of time
all chase would come to a cease
sometimes i laugh at the joke that is life
sometimes i wonder at the puzzles that ripe
every patch of earth has poison for sensations
taking me farther from my home
sometimes i hold my breath for the dream
that is no less real than life
and the cocoons of questions
remain bleeding as i witness
a glitch in imagination
no stitch in time
i live the entire life to realise
there was nothing i could say was
mine!!!
would stop writing further
day would come
when these eyes would see
no lightening no thunder
when there would be no
further promises of dawn.
everything would come to a halt
no aspirations , no fears , no remorse..
no one to bewilder
an eternal slumber serene
no push no gravity
vastness of sky would be fathomable
depths of ocean no longer unplumbed
no further cages of time
all chase would come to a cease
sometimes i laugh at the joke that is life
sometimes i wonder at the puzzles that ripe
every patch of earth has poison for sensations
taking me farther from my home
sometimes i hold my breath for the dream
that is no less real than life
and the cocoons of questions
remain bleeding as i witness
a glitch in imagination
no stitch in time
i live the entire life to realise
there was nothing i could say was
mine!!!
posted by meetu at 8:18 PM
8 Comments:
These words of yours infact it does heal the soul..it reminds us that we are merely a passing soul in this life and nothing remain as owned by us...
Remarkable poem..it in fact touched me so deep...
MY PC is down at home so Im not getting the chance to update my poetry blog..
I will try to post it before end of this week..
thanks dear friend
feels like u have a gift to reach the deepest meanings possible ...read your poems on poetess @yahoogroup.com......marvellous is the word for them.....
I wonder why I didn't see your blog before. A nice poem there, I couldn't read all of yours hopefully I will be back Ah.. from the land of the good things, truly remarkable. When you are writing a comment in mine I was reading yours. That is the joke of the day.
jac
Dont know why but your poems have all shades blended in perfect harmony .I feel like a new kid on the block in front of your poems .Your poetry is class apart, rich in style and expression and the best part is in least possible words you can express such deep meanings.
You exaggerate and it is understandable, but as you might have read my own view about my poem in profile, its exactly as I wrote. They are neither sugercoated nor it has ribbons to decorate it -like a plum cake without icing. I make sure the use of simple and easily understood words as we don't blog for us, it is the public who decides the acceptability. I write with vehemence and not ashamed to cry or laugh there. It is my Kingdom. Thanks for the visits.
someday this pen
would stop writing further
day would come
when these eyes would see
no lightening no thunder
when there would be no
further promises of dawn.
everything would come to a halt
no aspirations , no fears , no remorse..
I know I read this so many times but when ever I search this poem comes again to me
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