Sunday, September 11, 2005

Sumptuous slumber


Sand dunes stalked piece of land
scorching sun severed sonata
sweet slumber sobered senses
youth enslaved to theory of relativity
time keeps slipping like sea sand
captured in a lavish photo frame
a smiling face rid of gloom
will always be alive and untouched

every tick takes me closer to my grave
am I scared of dying
or scared of death itself?
pain of parting says it all
with super strong senses
it will find me from darkest hide outs
i may fool myself
with false promises of living eternal
like a dove closing its eyes
on deadly approach of canine
thinking its not there.

oh death!You are inevitable
an unwelcome guest, a mighty foe
you keep everyone on their toe
the duality in you
hurts and heals the wounds
left open by you with ointment of time
some plan ahead of your visit
some even beyond you
none wants you still none escapes you
am i astonished at you?

no one understands you
nor the gifts in your bosom
a great pacifier a humble equalizer
your justice is unbiased and unchallenged
you break all illusions of the invincible
taking away all wear and tear of life
ceasing all chasing and cravings
rejuvenation is your weapon
you reside in transition
neither in end nor in beginning

you enslave time and keep it guessing
a mystery amidst misapprehension
novelty your desire , liberty your duty
an unflinching and ungiving discipline
your virtues are firm even on road less traveled
cries and shrieks cant melt you
you will take away everything
every possession,every relation , every achievement
every inch of my body which has been closest to me.

pain and misery your pretences
peace and harmony your promises
like a mother you nurtured me
every night in the garb of sleep
waking me up to a new dawn
ridding me of the push and pull of yesterday.

But you have your limitations;
the one who will know
all your secrets and beyond
will be able to escape you .

am i falling in love with you?





30 Comments:

Blogger ESIH said...

beautiful..just beautiful...

Sun Sep 11, 05:56:00 PM 2005  
Blogger saurav said...

excellent poem Meetu....love it...

Sun Sep 11, 06:03:00 PM 2005  
Blogger jac said...

Yet every body is afraid of it, stays away from, unless your impulses overpowers it momentarily...helpless, like a puppet on a string.

Sun Sep 11, 07:02:00 PM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

thx AVIK and SUSH

JAC, you are right ...undoubtedly.

Mon Sep 12, 03:47:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Samba said...

Great pic to go with the poem! Where did you get it from? I kinda like the prfound thought packaged in simple language. I must say I'm falling in love with your poetry!

Mon Sep 12, 06:38:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Tarun said...

nicely written but don't fall in love with her......

Mon Sep 12, 12:11:00 PM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

samba

that was the most beautiful appreciation i have recieved so far for my poetry.....thanks buddy.


tarun

i just cant help falling in love with her...she is anyway better than life ...my view anyways ,

Tue Sep 13, 07:45:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Himanshu said...

hmm, i am surprised that someone can think so deep yet express in so simple words....... great work !!

Tue Sep 13, 08:47:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Raju PP said...

***hatz off to ya meetu***
i now realise, how much i missed u n ur poetry in that break from june-aug!!

Tue Sep 13, 10:18:00 AM 2005  
Blogger _ said...

hmmmm!!

Tue Sep 13, 08:29:00 PM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

uma
thanks buddy...

rajat ...
i wish you can go beyond this HMMMMMM.....of yours.

mann
well if u say so i will believe it...how are you by the way?

smile .....

so sweeeeeet of you . where have you been buddy? i sneak into ur blog lot of times.....i hope you dont mind.

Wed Sep 14, 08:01:00 AM 2005  
Blogger TheSpark said...

wow! tht's a profound poem u hv thr. u echo my own thoughts, albeit in a much more beautiful way. do u think a lot abt death? n thx for droppin by...

Wed Sep 14, 10:49:00 AM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

spark
no i dont think much about death....in fact death reminds me more of this beautiful life that i dont seem to appreciate.

Wed Sep 14, 12:15:00 PM 2005  
Blogger zee said...

Beautiful!
You know the time will come
you knwo you will be prepared
say your last goodbyes,
you lie in your sleep and when you dream of the death, you wish you can run faster from clutches of death. And as you said thoughts of "death" makes you realize the importance of Life.

Thu Sep 15, 07:29:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Art said...

haunting pic... yet what a beauty... and ur poem.... WOW!!! its a gr8 combination...

Thu Sep 15, 09:08:00 AM 2005  
Blogger S.L. Corsua said...

like a dove closing its eyes
on deadly approach of canine
thinking its not there.


These lines sent a chill down my spine. ^_^

you reside in transition

Ahh, full of wit and wisdom. Love it. ^_^

Thu Sep 15, 11:42:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Crouching Tigress said...

Wow, you sure can write! Arent people usually afraid of things they dont understand? Well fear is irrational mroe often than not. Like snakes, I dont understand them..and I am terrified of them!!

Fri Sep 16, 11:27:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Fatally Flawed said...

Hi Meetu :)
this one reminds me of something I'd written a long time ago called "wonder" (http://fatallyflawed.blogspot.com/2004_09_01_fatallyflawed_archive.html)

I truly loved this one :D

Sat Sep 17, 10:05:00 PM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

venus
welcome to my blog...and you are right friend.

art
after a long time i am seeing you on my blog. where have u been?

soulless
i wish i could write like you. you too are one of my favs.

searchinfo...
thats a new twist to what i wrote.

fatally flawed
i read it . beautiful just beautiful.

g .ambati
a sweet hello to u.and thx for tht sweet compliment.

Mon Sep 19, 05:39:00 AM 2005  
Blogger TheSpark said...

hey meetu! u know wht? life rocks! :)

Wed Sep 21, 03:39:00 AM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

the spark
i was waiting for these few lines from you. i am sooooooo happy for u. hope life rocks for u always.

Thu Sep 22, 11:21:00 AM 2005  
Blogger TheSpark said...

lol! hey meetu, pls do watch the movie. don't go by my opinions. iam known to be very 'professor-like' whn it comes to movies. i only like serious ones. even if it's a comedy, it has to be seriously funny. so maybe it's not as bad as i make it sound :)
normal ppl might find it very sweet actually. i'm an aberration.
it wasn't my intention to discourage any potential source of revenue for the bolly co. so pls pls go n watch it. don't blame me later if someone tells u the story n u like it.. :)

Fri Sep 23, 02:05:00 AM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

the spark....

but i loved that post .i m sure the movie cant be more amusing than that post. so i m dropping the idea of watching it. and i wont blame u later on.so chill......lol
:)

Fri Sep 23, 05:19:00 AM 2005  
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