Sumptuous slumber
Sand dunes stalked piece of land
scorching sun severed sonata
sweet slumber sobered senses
youth enslaved to theory of relativity
time keeps slipping like sea sand
captured in a lavish photo frame
a smiling face rid of gloom
will always be alive and untouched
every tick takes me closer to my grave
am I scared of dying
or scared of death itself?
pain of parting says it all
with super strong senses
it will find me from darkest hide outs
i may fool myself
with false promises of living eternal
like a dove closing its eyes
on deadly approach of canine
thinking its not there.
oh death!You are inevitable
an unwelcome guest, a mighty foe
you keep everyone on their toe
the duality in you
hurts and heals the wounds
left open by you with ointment of time
some plan ahead of your visit
some even beyond you
none wants you still none escapes you
am i astonished at you?
no one understands you
nor the gifts in your bosom
a great pacifier a humble equalizer
your justice is unbiased and unchallenged
you break all illusions of the invincible
taking away all wear and tear of life
ceasing all chasing and cravings
rejuvenation is your weapon
you reside in transition
neither in end nor in beginning
you enslave time and keep it guessing
a mystery amidst misapprehension
novelty your desire , liberty your duty
an unflinching and ungiving discipline
your virtues are firm even on road less traveled
cries and shrieks cant melt you
you will take away everything
every possession,every relation , every achievement
every inch of my body which has been closest to me.
pain and misery your pretences
peace and harmony your promises
like a mother you nurtured me
every night in the garb of sleep
waking me up to a new dawn
ridding me of the push and pull of yesterday.
But you have your limitations;
the one who will know
all your secrets and beyond
will be able to escape you .
am i falling in love with you?
30 Comments:
beautiful..just beautiful...
excellent poem Meetu....love it...
Yet every body is afraid of it, stays away from, unless your impulses overpowers it momentarily...helpless, like a puppet on a string.
thx AVIK and SUSH
JAC, you are right ...undoubtedly.
Great pic to go with the poem! Where did you get it from? I kinda like the prfound thought packaged in simple language. I must say I'm falling in love with your poetry!
nicely written but don't fall in love with her......
samba
that was the most beautiful appreciation i have recieved so far for my poetry.....thanks buddy.
tarun
i just cant help falling in love with her...she is anyway better than life ...my view anyways ,
hmm, i am surprised that someone can think so deep yet express in so simple words....... great work !!
***hatz off to ya meetu***
i now realise, how much i missed u n ur poetry in that break from june-aug!!
hmmmm!!
uma
thanks buddy...
rajat ...
i wish you can go beyond this HMMMMMM.....of yours.
mann
well if u say so i will believe it...how are you by the way?
smile .....
so sweeeeeet of you . where have you been buddy? i sneak into ur blog lot of times.....i hope you dont mind.
wow! tht's a profound poem u hv thr. u echo my own thoughts, albeit in a much more beautiful way. do u think a lot abt death? n thx for droppin by...
spark
no i dont think much about death....in fact death reminds me more of this beautiful life that i dont seem to appreciate.
Beautiful!
You know the time will come
you knwo you will be prepared
say your last goodbyes,
you lie in your sleep and when you dream of the death, you wish you can run faster from clutches of death. And as you said thoughts of "death" makes you realize the importance of Life.
haunting pic... yet what a beauty... and ur poem.... WOW!!! its a gr8 combination...
like a dove closing its eyes
on deadly approach of canine
thinking its not there.
These lines sent a chill down my spine. ^_^
you reside in transition
Ahh, full of wit and wisdom. Love it. ^_^
Wow, you sure can write! Arent people usually afraid of things they dont understand? Well fear is irrational mroe often than not. Like snakes, I dont understand them..and I am terrified of them!!
Hi Meetu :)
this one reminds me of something I'd written a long time ago called "wonder" (http://fatallyflawed.blogspot.com/2004_09_01_fatallyflawed_archive.html)
I truly loved this one :D
venus
welcome to my blog...and you are right friend.
art
after a long time i am seeing you on my blog. where have u been?
soulless
i wish i could write like you. you too are one of my favs.
searchinfo...
thats a new twist to what i wrote.
fatally flawed
i read it . beautiful just beautiful.
g .ambati
a sweet hello to u.and thx for tht sweet compliment.
hey meetu! u know wht? life rocks! :)
the spark
i was waiting for these few lines from you. i am sooooooo happy for u. hope life rocks for u always.
lol! hey meetu, pls do watch the movie. don't go by my opinions. iam known to be very 'professor-like' whn it comes to movies. i only like serious ones. even if it's a comedy, it has to be seriously funny. so maybe it's not as bad as i make it sound :)
normal ppl might find it very sweet actually. i'm an aberration.
it wasn't my intention to discourage any potential source of revenue for the bolly co. so pls pls go n watch it. don't blame me later if someone tells u the story n u like it.. :)
the spark....
but i loved that post .i m sure the movie cant be more amusing than that post. so i m dropping the idea of watching it. and i wont blame u later on.so chill......lol
:)
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