Wednesday, June 08, 2005

Face off

wherever i cruise
one thing is bewitchingly apparent
the walls !
between heart , soul and mind
those having fortune ,beauty or wine
cold welcome and cosmetic smiles
pain is masked
blood in drains
yashmacks of selfish stink
choking me inside out.
zooming to rot and decay
we are machines of cosmo fray
dearth of true emotion
human frailty explosion
smiles curtaining grin and mockery
pride draping shame and agony
one is afraid to mirror himself
something within all of us breaks
possessions are ever endless
possessing last drop of ocean
kindles thirst for more water
in this world of paraphernalia
mother earth can satisfy needs
but not our greeds
when i possess universe
what next?
where do i go ? who do i belong?
and one question that rips me off
who am i?
continuing the amble
foraying into intoxication
at drags of life
and the push and pull
that deviates us
from humanity and its gifts
my ordeal continued
in the darks of cunning wood
searching for the innocence
this planet has lost..

6 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

BEAUTIFUL!

> between heart , soul and mind
> those having fortune ,
> beauty or wine
> cold welcome and cosmetic smiles
> pain is masked
> blood in drains
> yashmacks of selfish stink
> choking me inside out.

I don't know if I'm allowed to ask.. but are these phrases indicative of something personal?

> mother earth can satisfy needs
> but not our greeds
> when i possess universe
> what next?

How true?

> searching for the innocence
> this planet has lost..

This reminded me of an Iron Maiden song which goes like

The age of innocence is fading like an old dream

Liked some of your earlier poetry too! Great!

Wed Jun 08, 08:31:00 PM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

thanks srinivas,

all my poems are alive ...they have a tinge of reality in them ....i cannot write without pumping through them the blood of emotions and experiences from life .....

so u guessed it write .

Thu Jun 09, 02:49:00 AM 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

push, pull, push, pull, push, pull ...

Thu Jun 09, 10:07:00 AM 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You are too real to be realistic, or may I say, it's the other way round.

Monsoon is approaching. Take a shower in the rain till you soak wet, let your mind flow, and for a moment, DEVIATE!

~SM

Thu Jun 09, 10:15:00 AM 2005  
Blogger Fatally Flawed said...

dropped by...awesome poetry here :)

Mon Jun 13, 04:07:00 AM 2005  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Certainly you out there to heal the world
Loved the way you approach your subject
Your poetry has a purpose not just words to fill the void..

Keep it up...

Looking forwrd to have you at www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com

Mon Jun 13, 11:29:00 PM 2005  

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