Sunday, November 27, 2005

Killing her softly

She sat unplumbed in her own
on moon staring from the window
eyes with cease on torn apart tempest
shivered at her charisma
the city laid bare in front of her
glistened with the filth of misery
naked and traumatized crusades
why she bore the burdens of guilt bags?
looked for a shoulder to cry on
aloud enough to bang
the closed doors of conscience
lost in the hustle bustle of city
swarmed with the beasts of flesh
was looked at and laughed at
yet living for the sake of it
a tear poured occasionally
enough to tell they care
left with numbered days
she could count on her fingers
she wished to live a few more though
one of those many nights
she was trampled and trashed
took away that last hope
that drove her to the filths of city
she would no longer see
serene breeze ,the lush green guards,
flawless compassion inviting her back
with open arms still waiting for her
the valley she left for the filths of city
she knew she was not the first
nor the last to embrace
the death crawling like the shadows in woods
gradual , heavy and dirty
no more reason no more motive
she beaconed termites of HIV positive.



12 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

'the death crawling like the shadows in woods'

How about substituting 'crawling' with 'trailing'?

Nice poem, as ever!

~SM

Sun Dec 04, 12:43:00 PM 2005  
Blogger Fatally Flawed said...

very well laid out...beautiful :)

Wed Dec 21, 11:10:00 AM 2005  
Blogger iamnasra said...

wow so powerful poem


Loved reading it

Sun Dec 25, 12:43:00 AM 2005  
Blogger jac said...

A bit tragic, but strong feelings.

Fri Dec 30, 04:03:00 AM 2005  
Blogger meetu said...

SM after so long? good to see u back on my blog


fatally flawed thanks buddy

nasra you are being modest.


jac i know ..its sad but real.

Sun Jan 01, 09:04:00 PM 2006  
Blogger Dotm said...

So very sad, but so well written.

What a lovely picture on your Sunday Nov. 27th post.

In case you are wondering, I saw your name on one of Jac`s posts.

Mon Jan 02, 11:25:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

dotm...thanks for your appreciation for my work . i wish i could write to express the real pain as well real laughter in my words but i know words always lose battle in front of emotions and their colours...still learning

Tue Jan 03, 01:15:00 AM 2006  
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