Sunday, November 19, 2006

ebony ordeal



of course she knew
none would welcome her
on her arrival
never a praise showered
never a word uttered
true to her duty's honour,
like a veiled beauty
night crawled lavishly
snaking through glitters
sprinkled on her robe.
a gaze through the window
radiated cold aurora
eclipsed by grandeur of moon
even in her quiet trails
nightwould never fall asleep.
dawn challenges her modesty
for she would never allow
humanity to remain in dark
and see the truth
in all its glory
and all its shine
daughter of mighty ticking time
she promises to return
to offer her laps
from a day of harsh world
to rest your head on.
sleep her exuberant gift
to prepare you
for a new dawn's spirit
she would wear
the twilight attire
like a new bride's desire
pure grace no satire
night is boundless beauty
for all to decipher.......

11 Comments:

Blogger iamnasra said...

from a day of harsh world
to rest your head on.
sleep her exuberant gift
to prepare you
for a new dawn's spirit
Loved this part

keep on writing . at time no one is there to read your words but you keep pn writing for you..and you owe your self the pleasure of writing nothing more nothing less

Fri Dec 01, 08:34:00 AM 2006  
Blogger Samba said...

amazing personification.
the picture, the lyric....
You make me feel, if night were a woman, she would think about herself exactly the way you wrote.

Simply a fan of your ability to enliven the romance in the seemingly inanimate.

Fri Dec 01, 03:47:00 PM 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

She keeps on her grace
She keeps on her faith
she stands upright and proud
the darkest of the night is no reason to sleep

she will be awake

Fri Dec 01, 06:37:00 PM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

nasra...

u knw u have exactly hit the bulls eye....u r absolutely right . poetry is my passion .

Sat Dec 02, 08:17:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

samba ...

so mission accomplished ..what say?

Sat Dec 02, 08:17:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

mind ...

beautiful ...guess i missed these lines in the post..u filled the gaps

Sat Dec 02, 08:18:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

mind ...

beautiful ...guess i missed these lines in the post..u filled the gaps

Sat Dec 02, 08:18:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

mind ...

beautiful ...guess i missed these lines in the post..u filled the gaps

Sat Dec 02, 08:18:00 AM 2006  
Blogger jac said...

to sleep on one's lap
or to smile or to weep

to rest when she's bushed
to lean when she's pushed

she needs all the grace
for, she needs all solace

Mon Dec 04, 09:31:00 AM 2006  
Blogger meetu said...

jac ..i guess i will have a long poem this time . i feel like having ur words in it..

Tue Dec 05, 09:14:00 AM 2006  
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