Saturday, June 14, 2008

you should not know !



Illumine me by your presence
Show me your core
Like a fig on distant galore
Swooshing and swirling
With trespassing ocean waves
On some lonely shore

Like the tick of clock
My heart skipped a beat
The beasts within are awake
To take the night by their stride

Like a tear drop
Snaking through my lips
Searching for a clue
Like a mistress of night

Caves of gloom and glitch
But the locks are broken
To run to you , grab you
Hold you tight
To never let go of you…

Ask the sky , ask the stars
They waited with me for you
Stroll of endless hours
By dawn shattered flowers
With leftover fragrance

To hear your voice
my whole world was mute
ephemeral like a shooting star
and its left trail
counting by seconds
to feel your presence

and when you come
will try to pretend to thee
Waiting for someone
Not my cup of tea
Dawn should not know
Secrets of night though
So should you never know
How I felt for you…….

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is touching
I feel it
I like the way you write too

Should one have the courage
To openly look
Into your endless gaze
Truly
Honestly
As themselves alone
Without turning away
Or breaking down
Then perhaps
They might know
Every moment
Of every minute
Of a million nights
Of waiting

Sat Jun 14, 11:06:00 PM 2008  
Blogger meetu said...

thx bobb.welcome to my blog

Sun Jun 15, 01:03:00 AM 2008  
Blogger meetu said...

thx bobb.welcome to my blog

Sun Jun 15, 01:03:00 AM 2008  
Blogger jac said...

The last part...I am smiling on it.
:)

Sun Jun 15, 10:43:00 AM 2008  
Blogger meetu said...

jac ....good i made u laugh.

Mon Jun 16, 03:36:00 AM 2008  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi meetu, this was really very beautiful. I was imagining you while reading the entire poem and I really like your emotions behind the lines.

Tue Jun 17, 12:06:00 AM 2008  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi anonymous.....welcome to my blog...but i would have really liked it , if u wd have come out of the garb of anonimity and revealed urself......

Tue Jun 17, 10:57:00 AM 2008  

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