red rose petals
stretched long swirls of twisted road
lies barren in front
should I walk or should I wait
a bit longer
hiding in my pocket
petals of a red rose
dry and dead
yet with memories alive
an evening like paradise
the city abuzz with laughter
dusk draped reflections
looking through the river beneath
the bridge and gala street light
there were voices within
more vivid yet subtle
where am I going ?
where have I reached?
staring those petals in my fist
I laughed yet again
merging with the city laughter
street lights , wild rush, loud music
but i was silent inside
i may not be able to tell
where i went with that night.....
posted by meetu at 1:52 AM
16 Comments:
You were chasing a dream.
May ur happy dreams come true.
mind....
welcome to my blog.....i think its some time better not to chase dreams thats the only way you can live for the moment and every moment alike ....
The picture complements your poem !sometimes thoughts and memories make everything worth while. nice one. Hope the the dry petals are safe :)
meetu,
I can't stop dreaming.
venus...they are indeed.butno longer with the same fragrance that used to be.... :(
mind ...frankly speaking even i cant stop dreaming..but when they remain unfulfilled they prick for ever...
"i may not be able to tell
where i went with that night....."
sometimes it's best not to tell anyone of your fantastic escapades...what say? ;))))
loved this..."more vivid yet subtle" indeed!
True
fatally flawed....
thats y i chose to be quiet..
;)
mind...
:)
One can never be silent inside...never
jac ..u know what ...
this can mean two things
you are silent inside when
one ...when you are dead or
when you are reborn..you are just a void.my dilemma is i dont know what happens at times these moments or these pangs are hard to explain in any terminology but they r nevertheless too difficult to handle..
Hey I love how you bring the essence of using the senses ...tatse hear feel or touch...that make your poems so powerful
ارخص شركة تسليك مجاري بالخبر
شركة تسليك مجاري بالخبر
من أهم الخدمات التي لا تستغني عنها اي منطقه على مستوى العالم كله اي خدمه تسليك المجاري وذلك لأنه انسداد المجاري يتسبب في أضرار بالغة فتم تأسيس شركاتنا وهي تعتبر ألان أهم شركه تسليك مجاري بالخبر وذلك لأنه شركاتنا حرصت طوال السنوات السابقة على توفير الخدمة العالية الجودة المتميزة بمستوي ثابت بدون أي تقصير ومن أهم ما يجعل شركاتنا واحده من أهم شركات تسليك مجاري بالخبر كون الشركة تلتزم بدقه في المواعيد المتفق عليها مع عملائها من حيث البدء والانتهاء من الخدمة المتفق عليها مع العميل وتتعامل لشركه باستخدام مجموعة من أفضل المواد و أكثرها جودة
This comment has been removed by the author.
This comment has been removed by the author.
Post a Comment
<< Home